I wrote this tale of boxing and the fight for equality some time ago, and thought that people on here enjoy it. Constructive criticism is welcome; I am always trying to make the next tale better. Good feedback will make it practical to improve the next tales. So, lace up your high top sneakers, grab your gloves, and come back in time to 1979, and the fight for equality--and the attempts to be the one standing up at the final bell.
This story has mixed and guy vs guy boxing, following tales, if they get finished, will also include girl vs girl.
Please help me out with constructive criticism, from writing style to plot to dialogue--ESPECIALLY dialogue; that's HARD!
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